Dishant Sheth

Super excited for your work. Loved it!! Only as you asked for feedback & im really excited about your work, I can visualise how far you’re going- Most loved: whole vibe of your work. “good morning” hope it becomes your go to catchphrase, I instantly relaxed! Hearing anecdotes/ experiences- comforting I’m not alone. And of course, the concept of 1 thing/ 5 steps. Most helped me: simplicity of the just 1 thing message. 5 steps- knowing how to make tomorrow different. Most suggest: save music for intro & outro , turn nature sound down, your voice & clarity audio up- difficult to hear clearly, & takes focus from your words. Tweak speaking speed & tone to a little quicker/more natural. Around -7:50 mark for a few seconds when you really relax was golden. Choose one key idea per session. Too many other topics added in, I became lost & lost the original clarity of your message. Last 5 mins could be saved for another session. From that, structuring the ideas more simply. I would say: slowly list 5 things, with a brief explanation of each as you go. Then maybe a format like: Introduce Anecdote of lazy morning- moment you found yourself in. thoughts & feelings you had. Choosing to do ‘just one thing’- listing the no., name, & basic description of step; giving your example of embodying that step; maybe a brief word on possible challenges to taking that step- giving your own example to back it up (e.g I felt shame, I wasn’t working) & a brief antidote (e.g I practiced self-forgiveness with ho’oponono meditation). Repeat for steps 1-5. Then summarise all together. I’m super excited to be joining for just 1 thing. You’ve already helped me and I’m most grateful, you are a joy to listen to and I can’t wait to hear the next session!